Friday Flashback: What I’ve learned August 27, 2010
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Flashback from April 28, 2008!
I’ve learned a lot about the writing process since starting on Whispers from the Grave. A good deal of what I’ve learned is due to my co-author, and for that I thank her a great deal. If you haven’t tried writing with someone else, it’s definitely worth it! You learn your own personal pitfalls and quirks pretty quickly. But I thought I’d list some of the things I’ve learned, that have helped me, I hope, become a better writer.
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Stop worrying just write! I used to be a ‘first draft’ perfectionist, and I’d get so caught up worrying about where things are going and whether everything is conjugated correctly that I’d lose the journey. Jena was always reminding me at the beginning to stop worrying about the details, and it’s made me a lot better at writing.
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Get rid of adverbs! I never would have realized this if it hadn’t been for reading Stephen King’s On Writing. And looking at my prose, it’s really funny how unnecesary adverbs are!
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Start “in medias res”, ie… right into the action. Hook people immediately. I learned this from my creative writing teacher in high school, and have been following it ever since. He wasn’t a great teacher, in fact… he was pretty bad, however this was one of the things that stuck with me.
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Use dialogue for characterization. I can’t recall where this came from, but it’s a great thing to know.
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Put your characters into great conflict. I’ve learned to pay attention to which books bore me and which catch my interest, and it all comes from the conflict. It seems obvious, but it does have to be put down here.
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The process of getting published, where to look to do so, and how to find an agent. This sort of thing had never even crossed my mind until Jena taught me about it. I think I probably would have looked at all of the hurdles to jump and freaked out, but she’s showed me how to wade through the process.
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Treat it like a job… I’m the first to admit to being lazy and a little ADD. But making myself treat it like a job has been an amazing awakening in actually completing stories. I love to rush to ‘get to the good parts’ but I’ve learned to slow down and enjoy the process.
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If you are feeling blocked, just sit down and write. The movie Finding Forester taught me this, and once I tried it… it really worked! Sure you may throw out half of what you wrote, but you’ve learned something so it’s never a loss!
So, I’m sure there’s more to add to the list, but I thought it good to list my own journey. And, of course, to put some kudos out to the authors who have inspired me, the authors I’ve learned from, and to my co-author. I think I would have certainly been just writing stories to my computer, and never really thought being published was possible if it hadn’t been for her.
~Kristen
Timpanogos Storytelling Festival August 24, 2010
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I have always had a love for the written word. I like writing. I like reading. I like the texture and the scent and the feel of books. However, I also love listening. I love stories told outloud and performed by those who know them well. I grew up with stories about ancestors and farming life and stories are the only way I know the paternal grandfather who died before I was born. All of this a long way to just say I love stories.
Once a year in Orem, Utah, not far from where I was raised, national and local storytellers get together for two days of telling. They tell personal stories, twisted fairytales, cultural mythos and everything around and in between. And for a few days we all sit in big tents and we listen and live stories of times and places and thoughts. I always come away from the Timp Festival inspired about my own stories and knowing I have something to share. If you’ll be in Utah around Labor Day you really should join us (details at www.timpfest.org), and if you don’t look for storytelling opportunities in your area. I truly believe listening to others makes me a better writer and it’s good for the soul. There’s just something uplifting about gathering around in the quiet and letting go and being told a story.
Jana Brown
Friday Flashback: Writing to the beat August 20, 2010
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Friday flashback from Jun 12, 2008.
It seems to be a trend for folks to be writing about the music we write to. This was brought to my attention over on one of my favorite blogs (Romancing the Blog). So I decided not to be a trend breaker and bring the subject home to scrawl about.
I love music. Very rarely am I wandering around without some kind of music on. I turn music on at home, wander around with my Ipod on, exercise to music, mow the lawn to music. You get the point. Music is a huge part of my emotional frame of reference.
When it comes to writing I see and hear my scenes at once. They play out in my brain like a movie, though I hear and see everything. Sometimes it’s a little overwhelming to my brain, truth told. So while some people feel like listening to music drowns out their inner voice for me it’s a backdrop and enhances everything I experience. Because of this I end up creating multiple play lists for various emotional states and genres. Before my Ipod came along (Thank you to my dear husband) I had stacks of CDs sorted by what I’d play them for and would go a little nuts trying to get things switched around and not lose my train of thought. Now I can just swap around between playlists and I love it. It makes my writing flow and I can’t imagine a manuscript without musical inspiration. Now, I have work to do…where is that Ipod?
For the curious – Some Songs on the Whispers playlist
Boulevard of Broken Dreams – Green Day
Now or Never – Josh Groban
Hurt – Christina Aguilera
Lips of an Angel – Hinder
Breakdown – Daughtry
Wild Boys – Duran Duran
Don’t Pay The Ferryman – Chris DeBurgh
Sober – Kelly Clarkson
Broken – Seether
Don’t Fear the Reaper – Blue Oyster Cult
Fight the Good Fight – Triumph
Renegade – Styx
Fall For You – Secondhand Serenade
Love in the Library August 19, 2010
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The husband and I are both voracious readers, him even more than me which is a pretty impressive feat. So to keep ourselves from bankruptcy we only buy a few books a month and then spend quality time with our local library. The library is a short walk away from the house and they have a nice selection. We like it there.
A couple of days ago we returned our latest haul and were browsing for new reads. We’re both fans of science fiction and fantasy books and so ended up in the same aisle, though I was going down the way and he was coming up. This meant eventually we were going to pass like the fabled ships in the night. I stepped in front of him and instead of just stepping by laid a smooch on him. Yeah, I have no problem with Public Displays. However, I hadn’t noticed that there was another patron of the library in the aisleway. It was a kid in his early twenties, yes you know you’re getting old when you call someone old enough to drink a kid, and after the kiss he just stood there in shocked silence. Finally he got his brain about him enough to say, “I did not expect that…”
My husband didn’t miss a beat and replied, “That’s how you pass people in the library now.”
Our observer blinked a few times, grinned and walked out the other way. The dear husband and I believe we gave the kid hope. You can browse the science fiction section and still get the girl, and if you’re lucky she’ll be right there browsing with you and sometimes lay one on you.
~J
(cross posted on livejournal)
Friday Flashback: Tagging August 13, 2010
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Friday Flashback from June 16, 2008.
As much as I’d like to have full time writing be my only job, it’s not that way just yet. This has a lot of pros and cons, since the office grind and my charming co-workers drive me a little crazy, but also provide a lot of writing fodder and motivation to keep at it, which is a side comment and really doesn’t have much to do with the subject of this post. Hah.
The subject has more to do with the lanyard I wear for this job. I work in IT and all of our rooms are locked down so that only folks with the right key card can get it. The key card connects to a lanyard worn around the neck, so it’s pretty literally the electric collar and leash of the office. Most of us, myself included, have been wearing the lanyard and card combination for so long we don’t notice it. It’s such a part of my normal dress that I’ll wander around a store or out to eat without bothering to take it off. This often leads to hilarity as people recognize a tag, any tag, as the sign of someone that works at an establishment. Even though the lanyard states the company name on it, I’ll still get people stopping me in a department store to ask if I know where a certain size of shoe is or asking for a list of the specials of the day. Just the fact I’m wearing a tag resonates with the idea that I must work there or somehow have the answers that someone wants. I admit playing along sometimes and answering the questions if I happen to know. It seems mean to send them away even if it reinforces the chance that it will happen again.
So all of this has been mulling in my brain as I’ve been working on character sketches over the weekend. What things do we automatically associate with a job or a knowledge source and how is that different when dealing with various genres? I have some of my answers…but I’m going to leave the question open because it bears thinking about. Maybe my vampire hunters need badges…ones with bright yellow smiley faces that say “Have a Nice Day…” Yeah…they’d go for that… Not.
~J
Wednesday Book Review: Wyrd Sisters (Disc world) August 11, 2010
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“Wyrd Sisters”
Genre: Modern Fantasy/Satire
Age: Teen, Adult
Content: Minor violence
Overall: 3/5
Review: This was my first foray into the discworld series and I chose Wyrd Sisters to read. The novel was a clever satire, although it had some significantly slow moments in the plot development. I managed to read 5 or 6 pages a night, but it never really grabbed me. The characters were quirky, but a little flat, all of them took a stereotype and twisted it slightly. Of course in a satire usually characterization is flat in order to avoid distracting the reader from the true message, the satire of modern society and mores. I did finish the book, although I considered putting it down a few times, and I’m glad I did. The end does make the slower progression worthwhile, and I won’t spoil it, but it’s worth continuing.
Friday Flashback: I’m afraid you’ll just have to wait… August 6, 2010
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Flashback from June 18, 2010
As much as I’d like to have full time writing be my only job, it’s not that way just yet. This has a lot of pros and cons, since the office grind and my charming co-workers drive me a little crazy, but also provide a lot of writing fodder and motivation to keep at it, which is a side comment and really doesn’t have much to do with the subject of this post. Hah.
The subject has more to do with the lanyard I wear for this job. I work in IT and all of our rooms are locked down so that only folks with the right key card can get it. The key card connects to a lanyard worn around the neck, so it’s pretty literally the electric collar and leash of the office. Most of us, myself included, have been wearing the lanyard and card combination for so long we don’t notice it. It’s such a part of my normal dress that I’ll wander around a store or out to eat without bothering to take it off. This often leads to hilarity as people recognize a tag, any tag, as the sign of someone that works at an establishment. Even though the lanyard states the company name on it, I’ll still get people stopping me in a department store to ask if I know where a certain size of shoe is or asking for a list of the specials of the day. Just the fact I’m wearing a tag resonates with the idea that I must work there or somehow have the answers that someone wants. I admit playing along sometimes and answering the questions if I happen to know. It seems mean to send them away even if it reinforces the chance that it will happen again.
So all of this has been mulling in my brain as I’ve been working on character sketches over the weekend. What things do we automatically associate with a job or a knowledge source and how is that different when dealing with various genres? I have some of my answers…but I’m going to leave the question open because it bears thinking about. Maybe my vampire hunters need badges…ones with bright yellow smiley faces that say “Have a Nice Day…” Yeah…they’d go for that… Not.
~J
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